DarkerSarah

I have a bit of a problem with a lot of description. It all gets too wordy for me. Description is really important, but you have to make it fluid ...

Out of honest curiousity Bobo, what is it that the Mormon religion is based on? What makes it the "right religion" in your eyes? I've heard a lot of stuff ...

Seinfeld

Okay, I don't know if anyone else does this, but I think it spawns from writing all the time. I narrate my actions in my mind, lol...it's so weird! I ...

Me: Girl who's never been kissed #100000089045968 Heh. Yeah that army thing could be a good idea. P.S. Is there somewhere where you get free clothes its gettin cold You ...

I didn't like this at all. Maybe because I thought it lacked depth and artistic motivation. It wasn't your writing that I disliked so. You have the potential to be ...

I'm surprised at the level of depth you reach in your writing, being only 15. I also really enjoy reading your style of writing. That said, I have a few ...

Incan: Have you ever seen Revenge of the Nerds and its sequals? My favorite stereotype would have to be The Token Black Guy. I may sound racist, but they're always ...

As part of my beliefs, there is one right religion. However, I do not believe I, nor anyone else, has the right to tell others what they should or should ...

Haha...that's really funny. I laughed out loud.

I think one main advantage of being monogomas as well as sexually INactive, is having time and energy to focus elsewhere. I've got a lot on my plate right now, ...

Right now? I'm wearing my gray Panther Pride T-shirt and a pair of david and goliath pajama bottoms with cartoony bugs all over that say "Don't let the bed bugs ...

Hey. This was pretty good, except, something cut off at the end. I guess it was too long or something. My main advice is to hurry the beginning up. Maybe ...

Thanks! I wish more people would critique it, too!

Qi: In I Corinthians, Paul tells man and wife to satisfy each other's needs so that they wouldn't feel the urge to cheat. And there are severals places in the ...