DarkerSarah

Anna Karenina is a lot more complex than just a love story. You're not going to be able to read any epic, be it Les Miserables , The Count of ...

Thanks Jack. I went back and fixed those things. I've wanted to change them, but I wasn't exactly sure how. I appreciate this tremendously.

To be sure, I was trying to imitate your style in "Remember Lanie." Ah...biggest compliment of my life. "Remember Lanie" is my baby . Anything good said about it makes ...

I'm not a poet critic, but beautiful imagery!

All these beautiful people. Eesh! And I want a foam. I'd never even heard of it before! Arieda: I love the one of you and your sisters! I have two ...

I always like your work, Snoink, but I think this was my favorite. I was a little bored at the beginning, but once you introduced the bruise, it got better ...

I can tell you're intelligent and an experienced writer, because this flows really well, and it's written very well. The main problem I have with it, is that you introduce ...

You have a simple, yet elegant way of writing, and I really like it. I like this piece, the short construction of it. I don't think you need the "during" ...

I appreciate that so much. I actually WAS wondering why I haven't gotten any comments on it. I figured it was too long. :lol: You know, I did think about ...

It's a mild R. Since there are younger people here on the site, I thought I'd rate it R. Part Three: Clarity It has been ten years since the night ...

Wait! This is the second part in a series of three. If you haven't read go do that now. Part One: Inevitable I think each section can stand on its ...

"everyone that are so obsessed with climbing them!" It should be "Everyone that IS so obsessed..." or "Everyone WHO IS..." I wasn't impressed with the beginning, though I give you ...

This was a fun read, it really was. Your characters were interesting and believable, a hard place to reach in such a short story. I, unlike Areida, wasn't crazy about ...

Yes, Snoink...I think that's a good thing. It's actually a very interesting way of looking at it because I didn't even look at it like that, but it describes it ...

Well, that "cold" atmosphere is really what I was aiming for. I can't rewrite the whole thing because you didn't "feel anything," because that would ruin the it. I'll definitely ...