DarkerSarah

Ope, that's it. I'm reading it. ... You did that on purpose, didn't you? *skips off the read Snoink's FREAK* -Sarah

Very right Crysi. Well said. And that goes for any spiritual teaching. The Book of Mormon, the Torah, the Koran, any Buddhist or Hindu writings (as I am illeducted I ...

Ugh...I was just saying that the Bible is a little different than Harry Potter. Screw it if my numbers are off. It's not fair to put it in the same ...

I'm saying that we wouldn't be saved if Jesus had never died and rose again. It's not his death, it's the fact that he defeated it. I didn't say his ...

^Has repeated about three other people in saying that

Well, Price, millions of people's faith rests in the Bible, and has for thousands of years. I doubt anyone can say that about Harry Potter.

Why the shudder?

I wasn't being negative, really. It was just a thought of mine on the piece.

^ Has cleared up my confusion very nicely. Thanks.

^ Has edited the word "bastard" with stars in his siggy, for some curious reason

This was more like a poem than fiction. It was lovely, though. Good job. The only thing is that I would like a little more development of characters and plot. ...

There was too much dialogue in this. And the fact that the father called his daughter "child" and "my love" sounded forced. The whole piece was forced and cliche. I ...

A little too emo and reminiscent of Gollum for my taste, but very well written. I'm not sure if you changed it around since Hunter's post, but I could clearly ...

I thought this idea was a little cliche, but it was extremely well executed. The stream of conscienceness was very well done, and very believeable. There was a typo at ...

No way, Ceylon! That's awesome... I've got a burnt CD of my it's kind of hard...Breaking Benjamin, Pillar, Killswitch Engage, Led Zeppelin, Shinedown, and...haha...Queen, of course.