DarkerSarah

Most everything I've posted on here has been "raw." I use the suggestions I get to make my writing better. I'm generally not all that serious about turning the stories ...

This is still VERY raw. Feel free to critique the crap out of it! -Sarah I arrive home from work, quietly hanging my keys in the kitchen and padding quietly ...

Love me some Luna Lovegood... gotta give it a 8/10

Sorry about that! It's definitely not you...I set up those links before the site was revamped over a year ago. I probably need to redo them, but in the mean ...

Hey Cal! This was VERY well written, and as I am fascinated by the ocean in any manner, I was interested in it from the beginning. Shadow did a really ...

I actually agree with you, Snoink. This is just the very first few paragraphs of a story that's been revolving in my head for years, coming out in different ways. ...

Part I: Anne No matter how much we learn about the world – about its big sky, seas and mountains, its people, tall and small, wide, sad, and caring –we ...

Hello! I followed the link in Areida's signature to get to this...please don't be intimidated by the length of my review! I'm just trying to help. It's a nice story. ...

It's amazing how a story as dark and twisty as this grabs people's attention so. Luckily for you, I am dark and twisty... The title grabbed my attention right away, ...

Hi, Elizabeth! I don't think I've ever critiqued anything of yours before...I haven't been on in a while, so this was fun for me! I know this is non-fiction, but ...

Thanks, Snoink! I really missed writing for you guys, and reading equally as much. Those are very personal questions, but also very valid. I didn't make it clear that it ...

This is just a personal story (very personal, actually). Names weren't changed. Everything's fact, just creatively written. More of a personal testimony than anything. “Fucker,” the word came almo

Yes, yes, of course! I definitely planned to as the story progressed. This was more of a summary than anything...I'd been writing on it for quite a while but I ...

Thanks so much for correcting that first sentence. I knew it was wrong, but I've read this so many times I couldn't fix it. And I don't mind that you ...

Hey, does anyone remember me? Haha...this is something I wrote a while ago and just recently went back and edited. It's sort of a summation of the romance in a ...