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DarkWhispers69

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: she and i we sailed for Ithaka

    I have came to say this is fantastic but a little confusing towards the end. But here comes some advice! Personally I would say for each section that you should ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: For the Kindness You Once Showed Me

    This should be every where, I hate how people aim to be huge, when simple acts can earn you fame, not TV, but fame from hearts and save thousands if ...

    Dec 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Letting Go

    I feel this is true cause I am one and is currently trying to break that so I can voice my opinions, I have almost succeed in action but I ...

    Dec 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 1

    I really liked it but where i think needs improvement “What is this place?” I said, desperate for an answer. “What do you mean?” “Like,” I thought for a second, ...

    Sep 9, 2015


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