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Re: Teenager
I know what it's like, to be a teenager, my love. [I don't know why, but 'my love' doesn't seem to fit for me.] I've been there too; I'm not ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Accident
Clockworks- I liked it. But I must say, it didn't seem to have any sort of rhythm or rhyme that I could locate. It seemed to me the only things ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Lilac
Night Masquerade- I'm already your friend, but I'll try not to be bias. On your poem- I did quite enjoy it. I do agree that the ending could use a ...
Feb 3, 2008
