DarkTestimonyofTruth

Thanks, guys! Awesome criticism! Yeah, I knew that there would be a lot of work to do with it. The concept is solid, but all the words need some serious ...

Not that long ago, not very far from here, there was a man, walking through a city park. He wasa very business-like man, despite his youth. His chestnut hair was ...

Eek! I'm so excited! You like it, you really like it! *sob* And I thought this was my weaker piece... I'll have to post the other one up, see what ...

Hey, I'm kind of a sucky critique, but I'll give it a go! So I enjoyed it, it was funny and a good read. I personally thought the dialogue was ...

Wow.... This is really bad... I was a b*tch a year ago. Jeez. I need to learn some manners. And all of the criticism is well-founded anyways... Aw, man, I ...

This silence is incredible. I can't believe there can be such silence, with everything that is going on. But I suppose that all of Manhattan, all of the world is ...

He paces his quarters, One hand on his belt. The other, beside him, Gloved in fine lion's pelt. The firelight warms him, Though not to the core. He sobs with ...

When I was born I was torn And thus taken away. Alone in a kennel Being gentle Every single day. Getting sick Not even giving a lick Not even going ...

It's kind of short, but I like it. I wrote it a while ago, maybe two years, but it has always stuck with me. Many a Rose Has wilted and ...

I'd say that I like the second one the best, although I think that it could use a bit of editing to give it less of a studio look. The ...

"That fright was indeed here" Rhythm is off on this one. I think that you should find a synonym for 'indeed' that is only one syllable. "And my eyes twinkled, ...

Andy, I protest to your treating a prologue as a sneak to Chapter 1. Because it is not. It is a prologue, and therefore something entirely different from a sneak ...

First, I'd like to thank you all for reviewing! I'm glad I'm getting some attention. And no matter what I say here, I am glad for your reviews and thankful. ...

[pre]The room was dark, lit by only a few candles and a small window. Through the window, charred ruins of decades past could be seen. Even with such dim light, ...

Adorable! I only have to say that Grandpa Buzz doesn't look old enough (as does most other people who replied).