DarkCat

this is rally cool i really dont get this part tough "What the heck- Why are you- Ruined ... My weekend? Ruined." Well see it's a manner of teenage speech. ...

Eeek ... heh ... I'm sorry about not reaching the epicness it could, With all honesty though I didn't write this recently, I wrote this last year :D! My friend ...

Well see, I really like how you started this, But I think you can improve on how you put your sentances and the manner of which you tell your story. ...

Prologue Once upon a time there was a city called Kalana. This was one of the ancient words for ‘Beautiful’. The elves and humans built the city together and lived ...

Chapter One Fang Gang Hi. My name is Rosalie, but everyone just calls me Rose…. Okay…Use to call me Rose. Now they all call me ‘Vamp Lover’. This all started ...