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I can't say anything except, I loved it, and great job!! ~M

Ha ha loved it, i laughed when i read it and my mom looked at me like i was a freak :D ~M

Hey!! Ok AWESOME poem!! Just one really tiny thing, commas. Use tons! After some of the lines I noticed u didn't have a lot of punctuation. Totally fine, I'm just ...

Hey! Your poem is awesome just three tiny little thing's that stuck out to me. 1. Use punctuation! Anything like commas, or periods, or exclamation points! 2. Capitalization. I'm not ...

Hey! I loved it! Just maybe make the *** and --- the same..other then that..I can't think of anything. Great job!! ~M

I loved it. Thats all I can really say. At first I had no clue it was about Twilight but then it kinda fit but besides that, I LOVED IT!!

I'm reading Valiant a modern tale of faerie by Holly Black and I'm loving it

I felt this poem started some what slow and average. The begging seemed like something that was written to get an A in and English class. Then as I read ...

I'm writing this story about a camp that I am going to with my friend :wink: it's what I want to happen but I'm not sure if it will. So ...

This is my friend's poem but he does not believe me when I say he is a good poet, so if you could help me out and tell me what ...