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Here it is! (If you haven't read part one they are at a camp type thing at a hotel in the city) PART 2: "Julian, I don't want to meet ...

Unlike the last person to post a comment I thought this poem had great meaning behind it. I actually feel that I connect to this poem. I, unfortunetly, can be ...

As a guy who has had his heart broken I have to say that the description is to a key! Nothing less! This poem is a scary thruth to the ...

Awesome poem, it really is! I loved how it started and the imagery. The only thing I didn't like was it became slightly repetative around 1/3 of the way through, ...

Hey, this is Jacob with a new poem that came to me last night when I was listening to the radio. Enjoy! Adrenaline rushing through my vanes. An aching pain ...

Very nice, and funny. I loved it! Didn't understand the "green ketchup" but oh well. Again good job, loved it, and yea..that's about it.. Bye! ~M

Hey, great job. The only thing I can say that hasn't already been mentioned is, punctuation. Eather comas, or periods to divide some things. And even though it has already ...

For a short poem, it was really good! I'm just going to pick on you about one tiny thing, when you say "Faux replaces where reality once dwelled as I ...

That was a really good poem. I can't really think of anything to add to that. But I do have one little thing I was a little confused on, when ...

Really good. But I am no good at poetry. It's just not my thing. But that was really good. I just have a few things. Why were a few of ...

Amazing job!! Really, I can not find anything to pick on. The punctuation was perfect. Words, perfect. It flows nicely and everything! And the mentioning God, good use for his ...

Hey! Awesome job! There's only two little things that I would suggest, [quote="Sincerly_I_Write"][u][b]and then she was gone[/b][/u] the others whispered about her some claimed she was already dead on

Hey Alyssa, I'm saying this because I don't care (just kidding you know I do) you care brake it up a little..like in parts..haha ok thats it..very nice. Loved it. ...

WOW thanks so much! Lol I'm the "friend :wink: " of Molly's who wrote this. I thought it was good, but to hear people I don't know say it is ...

Hey Nutty!! As always i loved it! But one little thing..why did "she" get taken home by the cops? Maybe it's just me that got a little confused right there..oh ...