Danny

Hey Jash! Day! Thanks for the welcome. The promotion has actually been pretty awesome. I hope I do justice to the green.

So, I was just wondering how does your cultural society affect your writing? Do you stick to places you know or you create places or use some other place in ...

Hi! I like your drawings. In the first one, her face is bent at an awkward angle. As someone who reads a lot of manga, I admire your style. And ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. It's pretty fun. You need to mke sure you have proper line breaks. Otherwise it doesn't read well. While repetitions are good in poems, this one ...

Hi! I like the lightness of this. It's fun and sounds good. I like the use of the word peace. But I think the last two lines need some tweaking. ...

Hi! So I don't like that you used the '...' It gives a false sense ofthe word scream. And I'm curious why you capitalized 'The World' But what's really good ...

Hi! Well, while I like the premise of this, I think there's too much of 'een' endings which doesn't sound good when you read the poem as a whole. How ...

Some of my photos. I know It's not much, but I'd love it if you guys could give me some tips. 06072010134.jpg 09172010257.jpg 10022010282.jpg 06072010122.jpg [Danny's out!]

Hey Ranger! Thank you so much for telling me how. I feel like such a noob. Actually I am, when it comes to computer. :P I like science fiction and ...

Hi! I like the quirky nature of the poem. It's interesting and I like how you have used dialogue. The rhythm you maintain is very good, but there are places ...

Hi! I don't think I've ever read a poem on this topic but this is cool. I like how you started and rhyme is pretty good. But the flow sort ...

Hi! I like the simplicity but you're not telling us a story or creating an image in our heads. You're stating what happened. But why not tell us the emotions ...

Hi! I like the poem a lot. It gives a nice creepy image. But I do have some comments. Why are the last two lines of the first para that ...

Hi!I like this but I'm not sure I get this poetry.

Hi! I like how you centered the poem. It sounds nice to read that way. But I think that each one will have a different version of 'dream place' and ...