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Re: Forever Suffocated
It was a really good poem. I liked it. My only complaint is punctuation. My favorite line would be "I didn't know the you who diedI knew the you before" ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Eye Of The Beholder
Hey there! :D This is a great poem. :) I like it a lot. I have some suggestions though. These are my opinions though. You can do with them how ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Lover's Cry
Hi there :) I'm just going to tell you what I think. It's just my opinion. You're the writer so you know how it's supposed to sound. This is how ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Hope
He stood beside me as battles raged. He made sure to let me out of the cage That I was crowded in, no one to set me free. He was ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: The lonely ones <3
This was an amazing poem. I loved it. Just a couple of things: The lonely ones In a war-filled world might add a comma. they stand alone. Their shallow hearts ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: Water Nymph
First of all. I really liked this poem. It had good flow and a very nice rhythm. Just a couple things; but these are my opinions. You're the one who ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: The Cry of Distress
Wonderful without a doubt. You are an amazing writer. You get the point across perfectly. ~Dannielle~
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Everything to Loose
He was everything to me. He made me feel perfectly free. Now he’s gone, no longer here. And I have everything to fear. When we talk, he’s someone I don’t ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: I've Fallen For You
This poem was really good. I like the rhythm and the lyrics. There was a sense of hope at the end at least from my interpretation. You did a good ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Wish Upon
This was really good for coming up last minute (at least from what I read at the beginning). Keep writing. :) ~Dannielle~
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Alone
This was a really good poem. It was sad but I know where you come from with that poem. You are a good writer. You are good at conveying the ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Feel No Evil
I really liked that poem. You did a really good job. :) Keep writing :)
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Beautiful Inside, Ugly Outside
That was amazing! I understand the feelings behind it, well at least the feelings I feel when I read it. You are an amazing writer. :) I would've liked to ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: These Scars
This was a really nice poem. It was simple and sweet to the point. You did a good job. :) Keep writing. ~Dannielle~
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3
Could you please review my poem I guess this is Goodbye? Thank you. You're awesome. ~Dannielle~
Oct 17, 2010