DancingFaerieChilde

Wow. Thank you so so much for critiquing my story. There are a few things that I think I cannot change. 1) I have to leave the actions as if ...

Wow. Featured Story. Crazy. Anyway, I thank everyone who critiqued this intro and for those of you who didn't like it, I hope Marion proves to be more entertaining than ...

I'm really thrilled you like it. One thing about Helena is that she's basically me (except that nothing this cool ever happens to me) so that explains her sarcastic, extremist ...

Oh, yes it is: Kelpie, Part Two of Part Two -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I stir from my sleep and survey my surroundings. The river has been p

It will help to understand the inspiration/legend of the kelpie. But, in the process, will give away MAJOR plot points which are coming up fast and heavy in the next ...

Oh, but don't you worry. There's a method in my madness and since I've been inspired, there's a LOT more coming. So, hopefully, it'll get better.

But if I forgot the kelpie, it wouldn't be about a kelpie, would it?

The reason for the jolting ending lies in the myth of the kelpie. It is an aquatic shapechanger than usually takes the form of a horse or very hairy human ...