DamienCyfer

I am working on a story, and I have the start plot sort of done, but I don't know how to continue it. It is first person by the way, ...

This story looks good.I think it has major potential, but I agree with the others. Maybe try another animal? But then, maybe the fox fits another part you have planned ...

Sounds very good. you should give a more in-depth history though, and explain more as to what the Elementals are.

I am currently writing a story, but the problem is is that I don't know how I can describe it without overdoing it to much. It will need a lot ...