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Re: Pencil Drawing - face in half profile
Oh my goodness, I feel awful :( I haven't reviewed anything in a really long time. I think the new layout of YWS really freaks me out, and there's no ...
Feb 28, 2012 -
Re: Souru DT
Now we're talking! Great job, everyone!
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Souru (Started)
They had gone through the whole act twice, but they were only focused on the battle. So after the show was over, Knight and Dragon finally had a chance to ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Musical Prose Contest Entry
Awww... ya didn't have to change it, but I do like the ending line. I think it fits his personality well. I don't hear that line much, so it's not ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Musical Prose Contest Entry
I really loved this! Part of this review will be completely opinion, and the other part I'll try to help. So... starting with the ideas of this. The first scene ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: The Lighthouse
I think the user above me covered most of it, but I'd like to point out that some paragraphs and seperation would be nice. On these computer screens, it's hard ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: The Wolves Are Out
I very much like this poem, especially since it's about your walks in the evening. I can really relate to that scared feeling, where everything in the shadows is scary ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: With All the Angelfish
Can I sing you a lullaby? she whispered – and then, My voice is rough, but I know a good song. I tilted my head, and she sang like sand ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Could Be Stockholm Syndrome: Chapter One
Please write more of this! (If you have time.) It has great potential and I would really like to read more :) You can do it!
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Blazed DT
I thought Zeke might want to face off with someone?
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Blazed (Closed/started)
Sire and S’oul | Government Base | Rebellion We crash into a steel-doored room. Xandi is with S’oul and I while Zeke is right around the corner, finishing off a ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: The YWS 2011 Yearbook
I love this website. That is all. Well, not quite. But that's the main point. I haven't been here too long, not to many people know me, but the reviews ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Blazed DT
I'm fairly motivated, but I also have writer's block...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Blazed DT
I was going to post about the rebels breaking out the others, so would you like to write that part? You and Shinrai? I will try to post as soon ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Souru DT
Yay for discussion! Anyone else want to write about their booth? Sky, Sparki, perhaps?
Nov 30, 2011
