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Re: The Death of Humpty Dumpty
Yes, I agree. This was originally written as a story for school and we had to use certain vocabulary words. That paragraph was only added to include those words. Thanks ...
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Re: Tomorrow.
It kinda scared me, but in a good way - showing that the words are effective. Insanity is always a creepily fascinating subject. I think the poem flowed really well, ...
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Re: The Never-ending Quest for Love
I really enjoyed reading this and also felt I could connect to it. Everyone wants someone that understands them completely, right? I think you portrayed that beautifully. Letters can often ...
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Re: The Unicorn (contest entry)
I like how the writing flowed easily in most parts. It was an enjoyable read as well as extremely entertaining. I thought it was very original and it had a ...
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Re: The Death of Humpty Dumpty
This was written as an assignment for English class. We had to retell a fairy tale or nursery ryhme using certain words, so that's why the plot may stray or ...
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Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hmm... I'm very new to forums and this site in general, so if I do anything wrong please tell me nicely. Thank you!
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