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Daisuki

  • Other Poetry Re: Empty Grave

    All sins atoned, All debts repaid, An empty grave marks where he laid. Honest hands, Scathed and healed, Our place in heaven He lovingly sealed. For through the hell and ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Counting the Stars

    So sad, but an amazing poem. It rhymes well, it brings emotions, and it's very touching. I love it so much and it is a pleasure to read, although it ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Slaughtered Over Kind Words

    This was a really intense poem. I don't know if it's just my stupidity, but I can't quite grasp the meaning of this. Did the person speaking help someone and ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Gracie the Sparrow

    I like this! It is a very sweet and touching read. I do think Gracie could be a deeper character, but other than that I really enjoyed this. I loved ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever Ch. 9

    Aww... I love it. I got kinda scared when Alex went into a rage at the end, though. O.o

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.6

    Okay, so I was going to try not to review until the end because I was reviewing every chapter and I thought that might get annoying. I'm sorry I'm not ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Morgan's Lullaby

    I loved this. It was simple sweet and it really made me smile. Whoever it's written for (I guess Morgan) is very, very lucky. My favorite part: There's more to ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 5 (new!)

    The characters are really progressing and getting better and better. Their relationship is highly entertaining and again, the dialogue is very natural. I know I keep saying that, but dialogue ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 2

    You're dialouge ability is amazing - it sounds natural and not awkward at all. I love the humor in here, it makes me smile and laugh. On to the next ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.

    Oh! I love your writing and this story and I can't wait for more! I like Alex's character and I hope he finds a down-to-earth lover, one who'll have fun ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Clueless

    I loved this! I like how your charcters seemed very real and believable. The story was nice, and I loved the ending a lot. It wasn't mushy, but it was ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2

    Best! Great ending to a great beginning!! I loved the humor and I love the figurative language you used like, "she avoided him like heart disease," or something like that. ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt. 1

    I loved it! I always like romance stories like these! I love it when the guy and girl insult each other, but end up growing very close. I can't wait ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Paint

    I don't know much about styles and techniques of poetry, but it sounded great! I love the way you used paint to get across that someone is hiding pain. I ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Looking

    Ah, yes! I was thinking she might have crashed when she was looking at her phone. That makes a lot of sense. But she didn't die right away, did she? ...

    Mar 4, 2011


Stories don't end because you stopped paying attention.
— SJ Whitby