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Re: I Can't Write
I have had writer's block lately with my short story, so I can really relate to this poem. Also, I really like the rhythm and the tap, tap, tap.
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Ugly and Beautiful, Terrible and Amazing.
I loved this poem a lot! It was really deep - and I could relate. I love poems like these - about being yourself and not caring what others think. ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
Would you please review my poem? Rip it apart if you must! I appreciate it immensely. Thank you, thank you, thank you! And if you can think of a better ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Walker's reviews
This is a poetry piece I recently posted. I would appreciate it immensely if you would take a look at it! Thank you so much!
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Boy 1
I LOVE his expression!! I would totally write a story/ watch an anime about this dude! Eh, sorry this review wasn't so helpful. I think most of the other people ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Ludicrous Love
This poem goes along with my short story. The main female character, Aiko, is very negative and pessimistic in high contrast to Taiyo, who is completely positive and optimistic. This ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: If You Only Knew My Name
This has so many emotions coming from it - it really is an amazing piece. A little bit sorrowful, but perhaps some hope is there too? I really love this, ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #1
Overall, I love these, especially the colors. So, I will try to review them one by one, although I'm just a beginner, so I don't know if I'll be able ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Black and White?
These are some little pictures that I did a while ago. I don't think they're really my best work, and I'm always trying to improve, but I just wanted to ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: The Song
I like this mostly because it is filled with complicated emotions. Sorrow, rage, confusion, and relief. I don't know what to say about the writing. Considering that it was written ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
I love, love, love the introduction. I love the dialogue, but to be honest, I think this would make an awesome play rather than a book. If it is supposed ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Heart of Ice
I loved this so much. I loved the love between the boy and the girl, but more than love -understanding. I think sometimes to understand is harder to pull off ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Cordelia Marie KissyMcgoo: a Mary Sue poem
This. Was. An. Amazing. Poem! The rhythm does remind me of Dr. Seuss, though. But that's a good thing. Personally, I think you're much better then me at poems! This ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Empty Grave
Thank you very much everyone who reviewed! All your suggestions and comments were very helpful and I hope I improved the poem.
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
This was fantastic! So creative, and I laughed about a hundred times! I love the character of Death, and also what he doesn't like. Number four was especially funny, and ...
Mar 14, 2011
