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Re: Side by Side
I really enjoyed this: 1) 'Cause it was interesting - I have no experience in digital drawing and... 2) Uh... it was just cool? Anyways, I think the girl on ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Will You Fly With Me?
Okay... so I'm thinking about making the background for the red dragon v.2 just plain like the first set, and then just replacing it with the first red dragon. Like ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Her Mask (Poetry Pairs Contest Entry)
Yay! Thanks for posting this and for working out the little rhythm problems. It flows much better now. And thank you to the people who left comments! I'm glad you ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Mika
I love this one! I really do. She has such a sorrowful expression - her eyes are really deep. I also love the hair (awesome color choice) and the shading ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Willing Sacrifice
You need not know why how where. Just feel the sorrow in her heart, the rage in her eyes, the fear in her blood. Step through her barrier, one which ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: The Gods play Marbles
Oh, this made me laugh! It was so funny, and really creative! The only things I had a problem with were the quotation formatting, and the dialouge formatting, but I ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Origami animals, flowers and dinosaurs
Hey. I love these. I like origami, but it's not a big hobby for me... however, these really brightened my day. To be honest, when I first saw the terrier ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: to fill a space
I loved this. The rhythm was really nice - it flowed well and your use of imagery was beautiful. The first stanza seemed very hopeful: one day I'll look back ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Hope
Whoo!! Bandit's first post on YWS! Celebrate! Okay, so I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I really liked this. It was suprisingly good, after you said you weren't ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Bird kids
Oooh! I love this! It seems like it would be really fun to take a picture of your friends and then do something like this.
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Fire to my Bones
If I had to describe this in one word - stirring. It was filled with amazing emotions, longing. I liked the rhythm, and especially the last few lines: I know ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Give Me Back My Soul
Transcend the realms of time and flow deep into my soul where a heavy mist awaits. When undertones drown security in a sea of “discussions”. When sorrows lurk in the ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: What Can I
Wow. I was really impressed by this. It flows really well, and got me really interested. I wanted to read more, and I didn't get bored. This would make a ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Based On a Dream.....
Wow. This was impressive and very unique. It really drew me in and made me want to read more. I like the flow of it, though I didn't like it ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Proust Was Beckett’s Krapp
I don't know much about the 'rules' of poetry, so I'll just tell my general impression. I think there may be some puctuation things a smart person could point out, ...
Mar 27, 2011
