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Re: The Boy Who Wasn't There
Hello! I'm back to review this wonderful poem again because, well... I just can't leave it alone. I don't know how legitimate the suggestions I'm going to give you are, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Disgrace to Wolf - 1
Contest Entry for Not A Cliche Contest. Erm... I'm not quite sure if I did that right... They’re here. I know it. My scraped knees burnt. My legs were shaking, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Who Wasn't There
Oh Micki... *sniff* I think I almost cried... This was so sad... I liked the rhyme "together" and "feather," I think that sounded nice. Ooooh. I'm sad for both the ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: First Attempt
I've never drawn a guy like this, so I'm really going out of my comfort zone here, but I couldn't help it after watching so much Fairy Tail ( Grey! ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: And it ain't from 2009 ;D
These are really great. I love your shading, and the clothes are really well-done. The hands are nice, too, and that's something that most artists struggle with. The main thing ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: An Abstract Life: Wonders
I worked so hard to make this not as flowery, and to improve from the orginal version - so I hope its better! I love these characters, but I feel ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter One
Wow. This was really good. I like how the storyline isn't... boring, or common. I mean, sure there's a lot of car crashes, but not every crash leads you to ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: An Abstract Life: Windy Hearts
This was shaded in pencil, then edited on the computer.
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Echo of a Smile
Hey, I'm not much of a photographer, but I hope you enjoy these anyways. The girl is me when I was younger. I found these deep in the files on ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Lightning Fight
Author's Note: I'm not a great songwriter, but this is a song with a very upbeat tune. Thanks for your reviews! here we are down on earth with our guns ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Photos of a Wolf
Ah, this was reall well done. Your dialouge is very natural, and that's one of the things I struggle with, so I admire people who can write dialouge well. The ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: This is Me
I like the words of this, and the idea definately, but the rhythm didn't really seem to work. It just didn't hit me and make me really think and feel. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Spiral-Horned Dragon Head Portrait
Ah! I'm so jealous! This is beautiful! The dragons that I draw always turn out childish and cartoon-y. So I love the detail on this, and the shading. Drawing with ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Penguin
Lovely penguin. I like the style, and it's really cute. I think the beak is a bit too flat, you could have probably glanced at a reference photo and done ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Running through the Beach
The colors and tint on this are amazing! I really like the shadows, and I would say that the dark at the edges is just so-so. I would reduce it, ...
May 1, 2011
