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Daisuki

  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Boy Who Wasn't There

    Hello! I'm back to review this wonderful poem again because, well... I just can't leave it alone. I don't know how legitimate the suggestions I'm going to give you are, ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Disgrace to Wolf - 1

    Contest Entry for Not A Cliche Contest. Erm... I'm not quite sure if I did that right... They’re here. I know it. My scraped knees burnt. My legs were shaking, ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Boy Who Wasn't There

    Oh Micki... *sniff* I think I almost cried... This was so sad... I liked the rhyme "together" and "feather," I think that sounded nice. Ooooh. I'm sad for both the ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: First Attempt

    I've never drawn a guy like this, so I'm really going out of my comfort zone here, but I couldn't help it after watching so much Fairy Tail ( Grey! ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: And it ain't from 2009 ;D

    These are really great. I love your shading, and the clothes are really well-done. The hands are nice, too, and that's something that most artists struggle with. The main thing ...

    May 21, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Abstract Life: Wonders

    I worked so hard to make this not as flowery, and to improve from the orginal version - so I hope its better! I love these characters, but I feel ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Mirror: Chapter One

    Wow. This was really good. I like how the storyline isn't... boring, or common. I mean, sure there's a lot of car crashes, but not every crash leads you to ...

    May 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: An Abstract Life: Windy Hearts

    This was shaded in pencil, then edited on the computer.

    May 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Echo of a Smile

    Hey, I'm not much of a photographer, but I hope you enjoy these anyways. The girl is me when I was younger. I found these deep in the files on ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lightning Fight

    Author's Note: I'm not a great songwriter, but this is a song with a very upbeat tune. Thanks for your reviews! here we are down on earth with our guns ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Photos of a Wolf

    Ah, this was reall well done. Your dialouge is very natural, and that's one of the things I struggle with, so I admire people who can write dialouge well. The ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: This is Me

    I like the words of this, and the idea definately, but the rhythm didn't really seem to work. It just didn't hit me and make me really think and feel. ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Spiral-Horned Dragon Head Portrait

    Ah! I'm so jealous! This is beautiful! The dragons that I draw always turn out childish and cartoon-y. So I love the detail on this, and the shading. Drawing with ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Penguin

    Lovely penguin. I like the style, and it's really cute. I think the beak is a bit too flat, you could have probably glanced at a reference photo and done ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Running through the Beach

    The colors and tint on this are amazing! I really like the shadows, and I would say that the dark at the edges is just so-so. I would reduce it, ...

    May 1, 2011


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