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Re: The Rebel Kings
I really liked this. I thought the title was catchy and the rhythm was fresh, fun to read. My favorite line was: I met the Rebel Kings, And never trusted ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: If I Love Him
Aww... this was so sad. I wonder what's keeping them apart? I liked the rhythm of this a lot. It was a comfortable read, and I didn't have to force ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: No More Reviews Needed
I've been posting way too often - I hope I'm reviewing enough! Anyways, this was too big to scan, and although the two pictures I took are similar, they're slightly ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Meh...
So... I did these while I was on my american roadtrip and I just wanted to share them. And I was too lazy to edit them, so the lighting isn't ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Basic Anime Boy
The other people have pointed out the important stuff so all I have to say is that I love his face. Those eyes are just really beautiful... I always have ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: The Novel
Yay! My first storybook too! Let's try this out: Name: Blade Age: 15 Gender: male Personality: Blade has particularly bad social skills and usually prefers not to speak for fear ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Botanical Gardens
These are really great! There's a lot of people who are better at reviewing photography, but these are extremely clear. You must have been using a high-quality camera or something... ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: The Storm
This was so cool! I like the personification of the storm, and how he, 'storms off.' That was really well done. Nice rhythm, nice rhyme. I really enjoyed reading this! ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Breath In The Thunder
This was great! I thought it might be better to limit the use of your exclamation marks, so they have more impact. I think someone already pointed out that there ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: The Elephant and the Mouse (Contest Entry)
This was wonderfully written, and seems very deep (although my brain is too mush right now to process it). I think the rhythm was nice, and for some reason this ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: "Fight Alongside Me"
So-so. Needs work. Maybe inspired by Disgrace to Wolf. I can hear your rasping breath just barely over the screams of footsteps and my own dying lungs. I’m running for ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: A Letter from Vanilla Twilight
Alright, so I've been wanting to do this for a while. I just took the lyrics from Vanilla Twilight and tried to expand on the ideas. Sorry it's a little... ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: A few experiments
I love the way you colored the boys' hair and eyes. There, that was eleven words! Sorry, I don't have much time now, but I might come back later! -Dai ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Blood and Crosses
Aww... This was great. I don't have much to say besides that the writing itself was excellent, and I think you're going to win the contest :3 -Dai
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: It's been a while
Yo! It has been a while. For both you posting and me reviewing. As you know, I'm definitely not the most detailed reviewer, but I'll give you my thoughts anyways. ...
Jun 18, 2011
