Daisuki

Aww... this was sad. It wasn't the normal, loser-guy-gets-dumped-by-stuffy-rich-kid. You made it sound like she had fought for him, and that they loved each other. I like how he was ...

Ah, I'm probably going to repeat some things from the previous reviews, so I'm sorry. I'll try my best to make this worth your while. I reviewed one of your ...

I'm not great at interpreting poems, so I didn't really expect to understand this. All I got was a vague idea... you're talking about time slipping away? How time moves ...

I really enjoyed this. I loved the way that we could feel Miriam's joy, her energy, and perhaps her insanity. I loved her carefree attitude, and I think you did ...

o_O I feel slightly emotionally scarred after reading this. But perhaps that's a good thing. Not having a description of what you were doing, and going straight to the poems, ...

This was lovely! I think I could relate to it, because I've been having something similar going on with me lately, and this was a nice way to organize thoughts. ...

Like I said, I am totally NOT reviewing the techical stuff in this. I just want to comment on the ideas you have here. First of all: Her in my ...

Ah! Wow! You really had a nice flow, a nice rhythm here, and puctuation was pretty good too. Great job on those things! It was a pleasure to read. I ...

I think the words in this are wonderful, as is the concept. Going with the 'rules' of poetry, your grammar and spelling is excellent. However, what I'm about to say ...

This poem has a really great message, and you get it across without being preach-y. You give the images, almost as if you are talking to small children, and I ...

Hey! This was a really cool poem, the rhythm and flow was nice. my fingers clench the grass underneath them and with a yank I uproot them The first time ...

When I want a poem to make me feel happy, but I can't find one, I make it myself. Sometimes - to put it unappealingly - it's like I'm puking ...

Oh. My. Goodness. I cannot express enough how much I love this, especially the colored version. I am in such awe that I will be no help what-so-ever. But I ...

Ha, I really liked this. It had a nice charm about it, and the last line was very clever and made for a great end. The imagery was fun, even ...

I feel like I need to add something... The last stanza was added in, but I dunno if it really fits... Oh, yes, and the last line is what Shinrai ...