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This was an overall great poem. You had nowhere to put it, so you put it here. That's fine. You had a great idea and you wrote it down and ...

Alright, I have some critiquing to do so lets start. This is a well written poem with a good idea behind it, and I like that you decided to write ...

This is a good poem with a great idea supporting it. A lot of people already said what I would say, so I can't really say much. This is a ...

This is a good poem with a great idea. The words flowed smoothly and didn't confuse me, which is good. The spelling is good and the grammar is also good. ...

This was a very good poem for a first draft. Your imagery was great and your spelling and grammar were perfect. You had I great idea and I wouldn't change ...

Your spelling and grammar could really use some work, but other than that it's good. You had a great idea and you explained it well, and I really got the ...

This is a good poem, and it was well thought out, but there were some issues. Like said, some rhymes just didn't fit or were forced. You had a good ...

*Laughter* I loved this poem so much! I love funny poetry and this was hilarious! And it's fine that it's short! Not all poetry has to be long! You are ...

This is a very good poem. I like how you had a rhyme scheme when most other poems that I review don't. You had amazingly perfect sensory imagery. You explained ...

I'm not the best at reading love poems, but lets see what I can do. I really liked the imagery and I really got the message of the poem because ...

Alright, so the poem is kind of disturbing, but I liked it. I like disturbing poetry. I'm weird like that. But let's get serious. I liked how descriptive it was, ...

This poem is very good, and you did a lot o stuff right. You had proper punctuation, grammar, and spelling. You had a great idea, but there is a lot ...

Milkncookies wrote, Help! Help! Help! I'm being eaten! It's a creature with talons, teeth, claws, Feathers, fur, hoofs, feelers, red, blue, purple, green, pink, brown. This creature is so scary, ...

Alright, I'll change it.

BenFranks wrote, Life: Full of truths, Lies and swindles; Good times and bad. A memory built upon the diet of priceless and countless emotions. Reluctance and denial waving their heavy ...