DaSpetsnaz

Can you review my photos?

Could you review my photos?

*Fixing* All fixed! You can now see the first two pictures.

I will fix the first two. Just give me a day.

So today, I was at my house, and I was very bored. And I like to take pictures. So I took my camera and I took pictures of my different ...

Great poem with a great idea running it. Your spelling was good along with your grammar. Imagery: Good. The words flowed as smoothly as the idea. Keep writing. Tyler.

WOW. That was an amazing piece. I don't play the piano myself, but I play an instrument so I can connect to this. This is a great piece and you ...

Like Matt, this is a great poem, but you kind of lost me at the end. Maybe you could fix that? But other than that it's a good poem.

I liked this poem. It was short and simple, which I like. Great idea about how you die and be reborn in love. But what I didn't like, just like ...

You know what I say, "short reviews are the best," so I'm going to make this some-what short. You have an amazing idea here, and you crafted it into a ...

I really didn't get this poem. Your grammar was off, so you should proofread it before you submit. And also, when you wrote "poem as lovely as a tree", I ...

I agree. This poem was very long, and you started to lose me as it went on. Your spelling and grammar were good, but could you make stanzas? You have ...

I have some tips for you. Before you enter a poem, spell check it and proofread it because your spelling and grammar were off. I also didn't get what you ...

This is a short poem, but it's a good poem. Your sensory imagery was fantastic and I could actually picture someone driving down the highway. The poem had a great ...

This is a great poem with better ideas. Your spelling is good and your grammar is great. An overall great poem, I really liked it. Keep up the good work. ...