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Re: Politicks-Chapter One
Hello! So I am here to nitpick and look over everything! Don’t take anything I say harshly, I just want to help and if you have any questions feel free ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: What the Emperor Doesn't Know
Name: Darren Stal’vuth Age: 27 Gender Male For or Against: VERY Against Rank/Title/Occupation Lord Darren, Slave Lord Appearance: Darren is 6’1”, muscular and well fit. He is strong, but lithe ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
So Queenie is posted. She even ended her speech with a little guilt trip. ;) Oh hey quick idea. I was thinking Lynx and Mrs. Assassin could go kidnap the ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets *Started | Permission Only*
OOC: Okay so I am going to end the Council thing for now, and we can vote later if that is all right. And Betheny, if Demoness doesn’t post by ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
Yea I say we end it soon. My vote is that we give the whole thing a couple days for people to think and talk about what to do. Queenie ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Putting an end
It was cold and my hands were frozen, with his blood in it. His blood in what? A vial container? Otherwise you were probably trying to say, “with his blood ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: short story brainstorm (Gran Torino inspired)
Okay first off I have never seen the movie. So if you forgive me that, I would love to give you a review… It was a quiet day within the ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Afraid of the dark
He woke up in the middle of the cold night in on March, 9 as if someone had just screamed in his ear. I would change up the ending of ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
Hmmm... okay betheny. I will wait for a bit before posting with Lynx. Maybe Demoness will come through and write something. I might need to do something with Queenie again ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1- New
I looked outside the window, the Sun was playing with sky, sometimes showing up, and sometimes not, or it was scared as it was thundering outside, maybe the poor baby ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
Wow Aban... I never knew you had it in you! WELL DONE ISHA!! I personally liked his four cents :)
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The Lonely Dancer
@ Starlight9 - Thanks a lot starlight, I really appreciate the feedback. @ Searria - Thank you as well! I honestly feel happy after reading your critique. I love the ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
glad you liked it shadow! I am pretty sure I would have reacted the same way had I been in his position... hahaha. And I think everyone should get their ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: The Lonely Dancer
So i wrote this the other day after seeing a picture and wondering what has happening in it. It might be able to go under romance, but at the same ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
Hey betheny, who is knocking? Is that an opening for our princess? Also with this whole Council business, I was thinking the Council would take a couple of days to ...
Sep 4, 2011
