DRdante

I like the substance of it. Its nice short poem with a lot of emotion condensed into that space. But I think you shouldn't have stopped revising where you did. ...

I thought it was a fine poem. You get your message across clearly and eloquently, but you don't overdue it. But I have one complaint. The Font. If you want ...

I liked it in the way that it condenses all that emotion into just one stanza,but maybe you might want to consider expanding it and then putting it into the ...

Like Snickerdooly I enjoyed it, and I thought the lack of punctuation helped accentuate what you were going for. But I think there are some lines you should maybe consider ...

Between the white mansions and the little shacks walks a man of olden ways Some say he holds the spirit of Guthrie No, he’s just a remnant of bygone days ...

um, Napalmerski. I was under the impression that most Europeans back then were christian. SO why would that make a difference. I mean look at the Spanish Conquistadors they brutally ...

Its a bit to plain for my taste so i don't think it stands alone well as other poems. The thing is these are lyrics. You even have a verse ...

I really liked the poem. And i think you don't need to fix the line breaks. If everybody wrote by the same rules poems would be as boring as watching ...

This is something that i had to do for an assignment about a year back for a project on the Book Thief . I All my brothers and I withering ...

I think the basic premise of what your trying to do is just fine, but I think you muddled the execution. The first few verses were endurable, but the part ...

Man, you have some talent. What i love about your drawings is that there really clear but have a goood amount of detail. something that annoys me is that a ...