DRdante

I like the poem, the use of imagery was very well done, but your execution could be a bit more polished. By that I mean that you try to keep ...

Hmmm... this poem is quite ambiguous but therein lies its virtue: "…Bazin would be obliged to say that the real exists only as perceived, that situations can be said to ...

Thanks Vampyre, I appreciate the review. Its actually the latter in this case.

First time writing poetry. You expect it to flow, like you've slept with the muses. No, its crap, total doggerel. The ungifted deceive themselves into pride. Wannabe Rimbauds they drink ...

I liked this part: I find that words don’t seem to fit In the gaps between our fingers and Underneath my wasted spaces like The crinkles around my eyes and ...

Jasmine Hart already said most of my criticisms so I'll just add this little piece that has gone unsaid. You do not need Italics and underlining in your poem. If ...

Thanks for the comments I'll keep them in mind.

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This is a fine poem overall. It might need a bit of tweeking here or there but nothing really substantial. I have one complaint though. Having read some of the ...

First things first. I'm a big Goethe fan so I have to say I love your name. Anyways, this poem makes absolutely no sense at all, but that wouldn't really ...

Your like shakespeare meats (haha get it) the guy from the Fridays adds. Its a great thing to see someone correctly use the traditional sonnet form. Because sometimes when people ...

I refuse to write poems of love Bent over in the night struck down When only its echoes I have felt And its cadence I still seek down lanes whose ...

First of all. Whoah! your all over the place. You start out with a rhyme and then you totally ditch it. Then you proceed to use the words disguise and ...

If you like Poe than you'll like his french counterpart Charles Baudelaire. You should also check out the beat poets ( Ginsberg, Kerouac, Ferlinghetti, and Corso). Oh, and definitely Dylan ...

I am 14 years old not young Though others may say different Youth is a state a mode of thought not completely in relation to the biological wind up mechanism ...