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It was during .1, I realized that this man didn’t even look up from his busy life to notice me. I died, only to prove that I was no longer ...

I don't know...I'm not really liking this story or the spelling. It kind of sounds like Sabrina the teenage witch.

WOW. I really love this poem. It's really dark and mystic. Great job.

tension/// The clock to my right was striking midnight. It was dark and I was alone with my dreamer. Before I decide to wake her up I need to know ...

The shrieks stop, and all is silent. Instead of the darkness, it is now the silence that is overwhelming. It immobilizes her. That didn't really flow that nicely in my ...

Sorry for my third post in a row. I need to tell you that this would be the first real chapter. It's not that great but the next two I ...

tension The clock to my right was striking midnight. It was dark and I was alone with my dreamer. Before I decide to wake her up I need to know ...

Thank you guys so much! It's okay if critiques are harsh I want harsh! (there I go with !!!!). I have a few chapters written up, but I'll only post ...

prologue/inside cover... My mind racing, heart pounding, legs begging for rest. The darkness that consumed me whole scared me to death. It’s like drowning in the ocean, you don’t know ...