DC622

This is only a very short fragment of the beginning, and yes he is supposed to sound a little wierd or crazy...

Something new, I've never written about anything like this. Hope you like it. Should I keep going on it? --- The Pit. They say that when you go psycho you ...

Okay editing is harder then I thought. I have to take a break for a while. I'll be back later bye!

Okay, thanks a lot. That helps so I'm going to edit. And for the conflict, the girl wasn't herself. She was going to be the person who is messing with ...

Sorry, I've done that twice so far...

I woke up this morning and ate a bowl of cereal. Well… two if you want to be all… scientific about it I LOVED that part i actually laughed out ...

I have the WHOLE story under "Dream catcher---".

Thanks I loved that part too being a 13 year old boy.

I like it. I think how you ar writing it is perfect, the only way the true emotions could really be captured are ina journal I think. Great job, I ...

" No moon tonight. Must be evil forces a work." I grinned childishly unknowing the irony that was held in my words. I love that line!

Oh and I just posted the rest of the story that I've written so far check it out if you like this! You can call me DJ if you like.

Thanks! I do switch tenses sometimes...sorry xP. But where do I do it in here? And about the info dump, I never planned on posting this until I found this ...

Ummm...It's okay I guess. Was it meant as a young person becoming old through time? Also, it didn't flow that nicely for me.

Wow, this is amazing. At first I thought it was going to be like marrige but when I got towards the end I got it. This is a very powerful ...

Hey guys I'm just gonna post the whole story (so far), hope you enjoy! -dj