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He never really "wakes up", he can't. He is the only dream catcher so he is always controlling dreams...maybe I'll add some type of twist???

You'd better not, she thought at him. Edward Cullen, you cannot put that girl through what we have to go through. Was she tlking about turning Bella? Stephenie better turn ...

LOVE IT! I think it was perfect. You should have included the rest of the Cullens like Edward's parents. But I really like it, good job.

I do use it for photography sometimes, but it's more fun to make layouts from other people's photography. I've never claimed the photography I use as my own unless it ...

Yes more metaphors and things would be nice, and put what she's thinking in. Put yourself in her place, be your character. Oh and some type of survival would be ...

very good so far. Is she going to turn out to be some kind of witch? The start was great, it really set th story. I didn't read that much ...

I really like it. I like the end, how she eased into silence. But the crash wasn't described well enough, and this seems more like a short story then a ...

I'm actually an Alice fanGUY.

So cute. I really like how you wrote that, it flowed very nicely and it was very creative. I have one it a true story? lol.

Blue. Pale. Alone. I really like that part. It kind of throws you into that cold feeling.

I love it...

here the second one it didn't show up...

Um the one with the girl is new, the girl herself was black and white so I colorized. The car is one of my favorites title:nightfest. Critiques? Comments?

Yes he is, that's The Pit. The plot sort of goes... The guy is crazy. He did somethig that got him in "The Pit", but he doesn't know what he ...

Love it. It sounds like it's from a little kid that's sending it to a big newspaper or something...