CuteJackRussell

Hello there, Firstly I'd like to say this is really good I also would like to say that I loved this poem it had a lot of really descriptive language ...

Hello everyone, Just wanted to say a hearty hello to all the new members, it is great to see lots of new members at the moment. This is a really ...

Hello there, I agree with everyone that this does create a lot of vivid imagery and it has a very deep description. I always find it hard to decipher the ...

Hello there, Firstly I must say your stanza's are all very mixed up and disjointed which messed up the flow and made the poem not as spectacular as it would ...

Hello there, I certainly liked this great piece of writing. The descriptive words included in this were all outstanding and all the different stanza's were very tidy and organized. I ...

Hello there, I found this so incredibly dark and depressing which is usually fine with poems if there is balance, but this was just way too gloomy and depressing. I ...

Hello there, This is definitely something we can all relate to. There's always that one annoying person who seems to devote their whole life to ruining other peoples. I liked ...

Hello there, I personally really liked this and although I am not a huge fan of rhyming I did think it really worked in this format with this particular poem. ...

Hello there, I personally found the layout of this really confusing and even the poem itself wasn't written properly although I did find the imagery very plausible. Really though this ...

Hello there, I personally liked this not just for the emotional impact it creates on the reader but because you were inventive in subject choice, you displayed this poem well, ...

Hello there, I really liked the power in this poem and I loved the fact that in the middle verse for every second line you contradicted all that you had ...

Hello there, This poem manages to be sad and gloomy whilst at the same time beautiful and graceful I am once again impressed by the power of the written word. ...

Hiya there, This poem in my opinion is really good and I personally like it however I have to say the topic is very overused. Also there is a lot ...

Hello there, I really like the serenity of this. I can get an image from this which is always positive when it comes to writing! Everything about this is calm ...

Hello there, In theory this kind of writing could work but basically this is just a bunch of questions and not really a poem. Still I did like it but ...