CuteJackRussell

Hello there, Firstly I would like to welcome you to young writers society. I hope you enjoy this website and that you have a great time getting to know us ...

Hello there, this is a really good poem that has a lot of excellent, distinctive characteristics that really stood out in this. I also liked the rhyming that you used ...

Welcome Ayra, thanks for introducing yourself to us it is great to find out what people enjoying writing about and just a bit about themselves. Have fun with this site ...

Welcome to all you new members :D! I think Snoink pointed out some really valid things that are definitely important in today's world. Especially the one about avoiding slang and ...

Hello there Solvalery, These are really beautiful pictures that truly capture the beauty in nature and ordinary objects that can be transformed from dull to amazing with just one picture ...

This poem isn't really supposed to be layed out in stanza's, this is how I actually intended it to be layed out I'm not just being lazy! Please voice your ...

Hello there, This is really true and something quite relevant to today's society where everything seems to be focused on one or two individual aspects of life. This is really ...

Hello there, Although this was very basic and simplistic, but I did indeed like it. My favorite stanza was the first one because it was more descriptive then the last ...

Hello there, My first advice just looking at this would obviously be to expand this and perhaps make it longer (it was very short!) Still I really liked this it ...

Hello there, This poem as a whole was very satisfying for the reader and I especially liked the amount of vivid imagery that you had created within this poem I ...

Hello there, This is obviously nonsensical and not really supposed to be a very well structured poem. Still that is probably why I like this so much. The pure randomness ...

Hello there, Personally I found this very simplistic and short, which aren't bad things except this was a little too bland in my opinion. I didn't really find the layout ...

Squinting through the mist of my messed up life, trying to understand what they hope to gain. Does seeing others in pain satisfy their greed, or just contain it for ...

Hello there, I liked this because: It had amazing language which really made you want to drink coffee at this very moment, it also described the exact view that a ...

Hello there, I personally really liked this and I found it really powerful, very moving and straight to the point. The topic you have chosen is definitely something everyone can ...