CuteJackRussell

Just a couple of pics I took. By the way in the first one the camera was wet so that's why it's blurry. Mister Big Nose.jpg veiw.jpg Okay guys took ...

Wow that's really good I can usually draw a wonky heart on the computer when I'm at my best, but you did an entire person! I love the dress and ...

I love all the pictures and I think they are really well drawn I like how you used black pen on some pencil others and used color on some of ...

I loved the introduction to the poem and I think it was a really powerful way to begin the poem. I agree with every thing you said in your poem ...

yeah i agree it was a bit short but I still loved it. Great meaning and I think you successfully executed the poem how you planned great work keep up ...

There were a few basic mistakes in this chapter that other people pointed out butthose were really basic things that you don't need to worry about to much had great ...

I really like it gives me a kind of shiver down my spine! It's got a great base and I think you developed it really pulls you in right from ...

It's a lovely poem and is bound to get everyone in the Christmas spirit. I totally agree with the poem and have no problems with it. There are a few ...

I love it! I find it an unusual change from the more popular poetry topics to a more interesting and individual substitute I found myself compelled to read more into ...

I really like it it's cool and I kept reading it over and over again!!! Well Done

Hello KAH, This is really good and you should be really proud of this. I liked how throughout the poem you kept repeating the line 'I’m so sorry'. I think ...

yeah I love it great theme. I liked the way you wrote that peice at the start explaining what you meant by 'she', but I think maybe that could have ...

Just go for 16 you can always edit it if someone tells you it's appropriate.

It's awesome maybe you could add a little bit more but except for that I loved it!!! From Me

I really like all these photo's but I think that the peacock looked best before it was edited but I still really like both of them. I liked the flowers ...