CuteJackRussell

Thank you very much, I admit it was a little rushed because the contest is pretty much being judged in literally a couple of days and I really wanted to ...

A deep rumbling starts in the ground, fear washes over everyone. Feet are not fast enough to carry us, as we start to rush away terrfied. Smoke starts to rise ...

This was really good and yes we do need Harry Potter!

Thank you so much for your constructive criticism and your positive feedback. I loved hearing your opinions and I thank you all for pointing out some of the little errors ...

A sigh escapes my lips, As I gaze, enchanted, at the magical sky. Hypnotized by the deep orange sun That beams angelically in the distance. The rest of the sky ...

1) Despite the standard of the reviews dropping during that period where the review teams are in place I would have to say, yes. People like it and it motivates ...

Hello Dethl, I play the violin as well and I wish I could play the piano but unfortunately my fingers were meant for the violin only! I have to agree ...

Thanks so much for making this page Snoink, I have been wondering how to do that for ages and now I know!

Hello artemis15sc, This is a very good poem, you really created a beautiful setting in which I saw in my mind. In each stanza you expressed a different feeling which ...

Hello shadeplet, I loved this and it's so true I can relate to what you are saying. You painted the picture for us, the reader, really well and this is ...

Hello VitaminCakes, Wow this is really good and i especially like the beautiful editing because it makes all the colors stand out and pop out of the screen really epically. ...

I just thought I'd tell you that this is totally incredible! I love your writing style and the langauge you have used is exceptionally good. Keep writing no matter what! ...

Hello jolene15, This wasn't a fantastic poem, it was good but not fantastic and I think you could improve this in many ways because it was just a it simple ...

Hello sunxkissedxme, I hate to repeat what the other to said but yes it is true, your rhyming could be improved. There were bits that worked and bits that just ...

Hello hopeispeace, I enjoyed reading this a lot it was powerful yet still easy to understand and I like how you used simile's as an effective language feature. It was ...