Curlyqpride

The details in this story are so magnificent. You really have innerthinking going for you too, plus I see alot of really well put together diolouge. I find both charaters ...

Chapter 3: Landing on Planet Mars --------------------------------------- I came into Mars's house and could smell the febreeze her mom just sprayed all over the room. I took a nice breath. ...

This was intense and I found the humor fun! (such as the barbie joke) The diolouge is what i found intresting in this story so never let that go, I ...

3 LETTERS, L-O-L. This reminds me of one of my teachers, always talks to me like I'm a dog! *claps* I bow to you, and yes, I hate the word ...

Chapter 2: After School ----------------------------------------- Leaving school is like a breath of fresh air. You can actually smell the freedom as the bell rings and you whip out the front ...

Wow, this poem gave so much scenery throughout the whole poem. I could imagine every bit and I could imagine the two lovers sitting beside eachother. This sin't your average ...

Thank you for the corrections! Since I'm new can someone explain to me how to add chapters? Thank you! And please leave more opinion! :)

Gorgous settings and the scenery i could just imagine! The kiss is cute! Love it! Good characters!

Dazed at Amazment. --------------------------------------------------------------- Ted Weller: he's not the 'star of the football team', he's average humor and someone to make you smile. His scruffy l