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Danke, madame. Your advice has been lovingly taken into consideration.

We’re having a tea party. Just you, us and he. We’ll fondle a hatter. We’ll tug your guts green. Cram crumpets we will down intestinal throats as I swallow your ...

So, I'm guessing I need to make one of these to start getting some critiques here? Hello all, I'm a poet though I originally wrote prose. PM me for poetry ...

Tick tock Tick tock time flies by Moments left before I die I go backwards, begin to think About chances that I let sink Hidden feelings never revealed All my ...

Why thank you, love.

Well, thank you love But the lack of "as" was intended. Similes used to contain only one "as", but modern colloquial English has killed the olde poetic value.

There were supposed to be italics in here, but they were left out and I'm too tired to re-add them in at the moment. Also, I wasn't sure what rating ...

HI again. This is a poem I did this year. And as I always say,read, comment, check, review, correct if necessary. I'd really like some help with this poem. (It's ...

Uh, bump. This deserves more than a rotting corpse of a thread.

Its about being raped. Poetry doesn't have to be all the same, your criticizing, not critiquing. Thanks for your input, I meant the words I put, I know what they ...

Disclaimer: All of these are rules with exceptions, don't Private Message me, arguing certain points. This is merely meant as an umbrella guide. So let’s start with the basics Prosody: ...

Okay, so you seem to focus on metaphor way too much. Poetry should be a balance between imagery and thought. Granted, there are some pieces that are purely metaphorical, but, ...

Moon sits in a greened copper chair, with dime-wide binoculars glued to her sockets, eyeing metal eagles on thermal sky. The ones that claw her retina while circling over fetal ...

Hey all! This will be my second piece that I've uploaded. Basically I had this idea one evening when I was out walking. In my head the idea was much ...

On Wednesday afternoon At almost five to four God did something awful That should be against the law [COLOR="red"]So far your imagery is rather lacking. On Wednesday afternoon? Who cares ...