Cthulhu

I've been following this thread since it first came out, and have watched as both sides have moved away from the central issue to nitpick each others replies. What started ...

If you don't like this site, that's fine: move along. So, It's 'shut up or get out' huh? Further I never said I didn't like this site neither did Dregy. ...

Having said that, this site actually has a really high review rate. We went over that, the numbers say differently. I've been on sites where the review amount was really ...

I was not able to track down what OYAN is, and "creative writing forum" way too vague for the name of a site. OYAN Is the One Year Adventure Novel ...

Ok, since I cant seem to see Cthullu's story Ah, sorry about that, I didn't expect anuther review and removed it. I can put it back.

... But you've had a review from Azila... Wow, you must have some high expectations. Azilas review wasn't helpful because I had already heard what she pointed out, and as ...

Well, then. As other people have said, ask for reviews. I've never gotten a helpful review doing that.

[quote]Who cares if YWS has more or less reviews than any other website.[qoute/] I do, and so does everyone on the '0 reviews' list. Further defending my stated thoughts is ...

Welcome to YWS! If you need Anything P.M. me and I'll try to get it for you. If I ever post something I welcome any and all criticism, advice and ...

I meant temporary character not a main character. Ah, Don't know why I didn't see that. It seems obvious now.

Ok, I can't provide a detailed review of the text at the moment, but I will post a look at each re-write, how they've changed, and the strengths and weaknesses ...

n, it seemed good with the problems being mostly mechanical (relating to the interaction of word, sentences, grammar, Ect.) I try not to do this but I feel I must ...

My first impression is that it lacks a sense of immediate conflict, and that it needs work on grammar/typos. I noticed some wandering, and many places where you've used two ...

Let's take a look at some hard numbers. My numbers are 'hard'. Also, I'm no master statistician, so if you see anything wrong with my logic, let me know. Ok, ...

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