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Re: Common Cliches?
"Chosen One" prophecies. Nothing can just happen to a character anymore - obviously they need to be a part of some huge prophecy/ secretly the daughter of the vampire king. ...
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Re: Common Cliches?
Okay. This one is pretty overdone. Not to mention it makes me feel ill ;) Girl meets boy. Boy hates girl. Eventually they are forced together by their unforgiving author. ...
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Re: How did everyone do?
50,350 for me. But I added another three thousand or so when finishing and then revising (revising one chapter, pitifully enough--still need to continue working on that). I'm still amazed ...
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Re: Hunger Games 3 - closed - started
Dammar Asarin So, it seemed like my competitors were idiots. But I'd always thought that of the people in my District, so maybe human beings were just idiots. Or maybe ...
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Re: Z-1412 (Accepting characters, please read carefully)
((It certainly seems different...)) I slung the Mini-14 over my shoulder and clambered through the window. I looked around. They were searching for supplies. Admittedly, I needed some, but I ...
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Re: My first chapter! of my first book! ..help! thank you
Well, I have to say...for a first novel, an opening at that, it is very compelling. I've noticed some missing periods (there should always be an end to a sentence), ...
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Re: Untitled Chapter One
((Okay. This is the first chapter (obviously) of a mystery/suspense/horror/etc. novel I'm working on. No, don't worry--no elves or spaceships. I just can't make up my mind what I want ...
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Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
Miranda--Beach "I'm Miranda," I replied to the girl, fear gnawing at my gut as I responded, "Miranda DeRossi." I crossed my arms and viewed the others. My jacket was dry, ...
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Re: Art for Free?
Not exactly sure where to put this but... I shall draw your character and put it...somewhere...for you to look at. Tell me how to do it (get it here) and ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: How to write realistically?
Hey, I'll help... I'm pretty socially isolated myself, but I like to think I know people. I notice things other people don't, anyway. I'd suggest reading "Animal Magnetism" at some ...
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Re: Novel Comedy
I luuurve comedy. Unfortunately, it seems like the only stuff I can find is fan-fiction (the antithesis of fan-fiction). Otherwise, "The Pirates of Turtle Rock" was hilarious (they all died, ...
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Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
Annalise--Plane I might have been worried about, you know, being stuck in the plane. But I really wasn't. Okay, total lie. I'd sort of managed to squeeze in with the ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
Zhabia (Zabi) Eswara I stood up, and looked out at the ocean and saw the plane, about half submerged in water. My heart sank when I realized there were probably ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Island of Despair (Starting)
((Thank you so much for joining! You can go on and RP as soon as you feel like it. :) ))
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: The Demon Brothers (*coco + Cspr)
CALEB "So, what are you thinking?" I ask Lucan, whispering of course, as we move away from the now-wailing ambulance. "And who exactly is going to fix up those slashes? ...
Dec 27, 2010
