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I noticed a few spelling errors. At first, you had 'al' rather than 'all'. Later on, you put 'alright'. The proper form is 'all right'. Otherwise, the story was curious ...

This is...interesting. Not sure if I have a better word, but it's interesting. The storyline is different in its own way I suppose (shadows are feared in most stories and ...

:O I have no words. This is amazing. No, seriously. :D Of course, any sort of anime amazes me. But I just love all the color. Fawesome job. The top ...

Paxton I raised an eyebrow at the guy. "Going somewhere in a hurry, eh? Well, I'd suggest being careful. Stepping on toes, metaphorically or not, is seen as rude here." ...

CALEB I frowned, wondering what on earth Shang could want. “Do you need me?” Lucan gave me a look. “I mean, do you need my help?” He scoffed. “Of course,” ...

Miranda: I catch one of the protein bars and smile halfway at the guy. "Good," I say carefully, before gathering them all up and putting them in a pile by ...

Should we start soon? ((Sounds good to me. :D ))

/// CALEB Green eyes...gold eyes...cat's eyes... Blurriness. Shock-y light. Smoke. "So, how are you doing?" Warped. Female? Dark. Another flash of light, displaying a smile with pointy teeth. "Ah!" I ...

Yes. So I want to get back into script writing. I did it for a bit, but then I stopped. Novel writing has always been my main interest, but I ...

CALEB All the air in my body left with a whoosh as Huck jumped on my belly; his amber eyes staring daggers into mine. "Ugh, get off me, dog," I ...

CALEB I huffed and let my forehead fall against the door. "Ouch," I say, after about five seconds. That hit rather late. Eh. "Bro? You there, man? I'm really, really ...

144 /// "Shouldn't we go back?" I asked, glancing sideways at the thing beside me. I think it was called a girl. "To the scientists?" I shivered and scooted over ...

/// CHAPTER TWO CALEB Was it a bad sign if you couldn't remember your own name? I'm pretty sure it was. Everything was a wild blur. I remembered a girl ...

So, this is my latest attempt at drawing. I think I've improved some. Anyway, he's Caleb Mercer (obviously) out of coco* and I's "The Demon Brothers". He's my character, FYI. ...

"Well, it wasn’t quite a uni-brow, but I’d always taken the mickey out of him for it anyway." Eh? I don't know what that means. I like the atmosphere of ...