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Um, I'm a rather odd peep, but I'm American, so... Ding-bat--idiot, stupid person. Fawesome/fexcellent/fool--I imagine you can figure out what those mean. Bat-caver--I know it's an old term, but it ...

I tend to use languages like German, or Dutch, to name my spells in a novel I'm working on--using a translating service. It might be a good idea to pick ...

CALEB I think I just stood there frozen, jaw slightly unhinged, for five minutes. Okay, so maybe that was slightly dramatic. I stood there for roughly thirty seconds. “What?” Lucan ...

@Everyone Else: Still working! I like to finish each piece completely before I start a new one*. *Speaking of which, fictionfanatic, you can still decide what colors your background is, ...

@Warrior Princess: Your man is done. I sent you a PM, however, on what you'd like the background to look like. @Apple: Same as above--except, ya know, she is a ...

*is sitting on edge of seat* Okay, first off let me tell you this--awesome prologue. Mine are normally ten times longer. I didn't notice much wrong with the grammar except ...

Well, I do like it. It paints a nice picture and delves slightly, but I think it needs more...heart? Like maybe it shouldn't have ended so quickly? It's the end ...

Okay, so it's starting out good. The girl isn't perfect and the guy seems caring. Fawesome. And neither of them are whining constantly. You deserve a gold star. Now, onto ...

I, personally, think the most terrifying villain is the most human. He doesn't have to be strange, or speak oddly, or seem dark. It's the normal one that gets me. ...

So, I'll start off by first saying the title and the description got me curious. Now I'll cut to the chase and say I review by finding issues first, then ...

So, I got prompted to write a poem where I turned a spell/potion with all the steps into, well, poetry. Yeah. I was informed it would read better in stanzas. ...

So I was prompted to write a poem (the first one without being forced), by working out a potion, its ingredients and such, then turning it into a poem. I'm ...

So, it seems like going from the reviews this was a longer story. Oh, well. I'll help you with what's left, I suppose. Now, I must say this was interesting. ...

I think this is a good article. It is concise and to the point; as well as structured. Your spelling skills are also very good. However, you don't spend much ...

(First off, realize this is an experiment and so is the title. Secondly, I wrote this with a 99.1 fever and it's probably unfinished, but I feel like it might ...