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I'll do edits first, then tell you what I think, okay? Notes: Edits will be in CAPITALS. That does not mean they should remain that way, it's just to grab ...

This is quite interesting. The thought-pattern is curious. I will admit its good you didn't name your friend, though. Ha. That could've been bad...and that was a totally random thought. ...

So, I think this should go here? Anyway, this is the poem dasiamari and I wrote for the Poetry Pairs Contest. Yes. Tell us what you think? -- They say ...

"Child 44". Because (from Wikipedia): "The novel is based on the crimes of Ukrainian serial killer Andrei Chikatilo, also known as the Rostov Ripper, who was convicted of and executed ...

Book List: City of Thieves (So sad...) Bloodline, Bloodline: Reckoning by Kate Cary (For when you need some villain vampires. Might be a good idea to read Dracula, first. Otherwise: ...

Hey. So, I liked this piece. It's interesting, though the end has me all confuzzled. But that's my normal state, so maybe I'm just missing something. I was sort of ...

CALEB The fact I was forced to practically drag Lucan up to the office was bad enough. Now he was just standing, leaned on his desk, and watching me. So, ...

Hm. Well, this was a lot more...intriguing. I could see the darkness, the creepy smile on the guy's face. However, the girl doesn't interest me. She needs something more. I ...

You know, I quite liked this. It was simple and the rhyme was rather good. However, it doesn't aid me much. I believe you might do good maybe with a ...

Since I'm prone to editing first, I will edit first. Don't get upset, I'm just working through it--then I'll tell you what I like! And take it with a grain ...

As people have taken care of the technical issues related to this poem, I'll go and say I find it interesting. It makes me think of the beating of a ...

A/N/Disclaimer: So, there's going to be a Flash Fiction Night at my library. Under 1,000 words, poetry or short story, and you get to read it in the theater. I ...

So, I think this is narrative poetry. Maybe. It tells a story, but it's more abstract, I think. Anyway...hope you enjoy. /// Thereabouts we flee, Whereabouts we run, Faster, faster— ...

AN: And hello, my dears, this short story is back! I have trashed my old story, rebuilt it from scratch (more or less), and obsessively rewritten things. It's probably as ...

Well, this was pretty interesting. I have two nitpicks, though. I know I don't know how the rest of it reads, but, yeah. You use a lot of summary dialogue. ...