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Edits first, comments later. This is how my mind works. My anal-retentive ways will not allow anything else. But, as always, feel free to take all with a grain of ...

I liked it. However, it made me sleepy...which I'm not sure was intentional or not. If it was, good job. If it wasn't, pretend like it was. *yawns* Good job, ...

Very interesting. It looks more like a phoenix than a dove to me, but I'm a mythology nerd, so ignore me. Nicely done, though. I tend to hack at my ...

This is how I think (somewhat) it should look, but take everything with a grain of salt; She looks into his eyes, desperately searching and searching-- For even just the ...

I like these three: -Warren McMillan -Mark Abbe -Woodson Von Delle Mark Abbe is a simple name, the sort of boy-next-door, seemingly nonthreatening and not an issue, until BAM, he ...

To paraphrase Stephen King: I get my ideas from Wal-Mart. Ideas are all 'round! Just keep your eyes and ears open. Listen in on conversations. Good naturally stalk people. Go ...

This is for the lovely Mr. Othan, because he's one of my favorites out of my first novel. Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? Direnc Othan. ...

Hm. This sounds fun. *tries* /// Human of the Year When I offer you survival, you say it’s hard enough to live. -Bling (Confessions of a King) It’s terrible love ...

Hm. Interesting...but... My pet peeves will come out and play now. I don't mean to offend, but if I don't let them... 1. Adverbs. To quote Stephen King: "The road ...

@Persephoneia: You are totes wearing a toga and holding a sheaf of grain. You also sort of have a smoky/pale complexion, because you hang around the Underworld too much. (Yeah, ...

CALEB “ Call of the Wild ? The Holy Bible?” I narrowed my eyes and looked back at Nora in the rear-view mirror. First, she’d slammed the door. Then she’d ...

@jasminebells: I see ya as a very colorful person, maybe with tipped, shaggy hair--orange-y-blond dyed?--and giant brown eyes. Kinda medium-height-ish and with a fondness for black and neon colors. Bu

A/N: So, this is one of my latest projects. It is a hodgepodge of historical fiction, fantasy, spiritual, and horror. I think. Also, if anyone thinks I need to up ...

I'll do edits first, then tell you what I like/dislike, etc., all right? /// the wash breaks from the line, white linen flinging from your hands, coming undone midair, like ...

"Foris Solum"? *poker face* Am I an idiot for not knowing that? Anyway, knowing it spelled out a phrase made more sense because I was like: Wait, what is this? ...