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A/N: So, here's chapter four. It's rather short. Also, I get to use my extensive knowledge of the color names for watercolor pencils. I'm amazing , obviously. (Yes, I am ...

CHAPTER THREE Angela’s Chevy Cordoba was ancient. That really couldn’t be denied. It was also tobacco brown and with plenty of unsightly dents. It had been keyed once down the ...

Very pretty. It has a simple rhythm, a simple rhyme, but you did well at choosing words. You made it seem very--child-like, which definitely is a compliment, by the way. ...

So, this was pretty fun. Hannah was an interesting character--one who caught your eye. While she appeared usual the way you weaved in the reasons why she was so tense ...

A/N: Hey. So, this is chapter two--and I wrote it in two sittings, more or less, and it sort of just spilled out. I'm not sure how good it is, ...

A/N: I'm going out on a limb posting this. It's in solid first draft mode and I haven't gotten all my backstory cemented. However, I have the entire plot in ...

CHAPTER NINE Answered “How are you not skinned alive? I’d be skinned alive. Not fair. Not fair at all,” Luke said, where he laid down on the floor, blankets bundled ...

Wow. So . . . I really like this! It draws you in, gets you interested in what is going on with the kid--he has two somebodies that might care ...

A/N: Hey, so I'm back once again. I've edited the rest of this book's first part (which goes from chapter one to chapter--well, it's chapter fourteen, but online I might ...

This was quite good for a short story. Personally, I would have liked more info--but more info would probably have led it to be fanfiction-y. You can't do much with ...

Uh, I was about eleven, I think. It was shortly after my family moved into a house dead-set in the badlands and I had nothing better to do than read ...

CALEB Quincy. Lucan had arrived with Quincy. On his motorcycle. I could only look over the dashboard in shock. For one, I had no idea how Luc’s motorcycle could even ...

A/N: Once again, thank you everybody who reads and those who also review. Note the offer in Chapter Five's A/N still stands. Hope you enjoy Chapter Seven. /// C HAPTER ...

CHAPTER SIX Cairn Coh stared at the small heap of rocks, an intensity in his eyes that was rarely seen. His shoulders were hunched; every muscle tight. He started sweating ...

A/N: Thanks to my kind reviewers and all my readers. You guys are awesome! Also, if anybody here would be able to do a proofread on this entire manuscript before ...