Cspr

CALEB I let out a weak chuckle. I was, okay, slightly overwhelmed. I mean, I was in a room full of vampires and I didn’t intend to stake any of ...

So . . . I have nothing to say except this was wonderful. There isn't much rhyme whatsoever or any particular set as far as I can tell. There's a ...

Wow. So, I quite like this. I was expecting something totally different going by the title, but--no, this is good. Unexpected. (Even if I was expecting something to make me ...

Hey. So, Cspr here and I'll be your reviewer today. While I haven't read the rest of this book--and I definitely will have to now--what I've seen so far is ...

So, the idea definitely has me intrigued. I have a vague idea of where things are headed from here (of course, as I'm a fanfiction-ite my ideas may be a ...

A/N: So, here is chapter seven--rather obviously. Note it's a mite larger than usual as I couldn't decide on how to break it, so I left it as one chapter. ...

Hey, Captain Nitpick (otherwise known as Cspr) here and I'm breezing through to review. First off, nice job at the title--and drawing me in. Normally I'm either put off by ...

CHAPTER SIX Angela looked at herself in the mirror. Her face was all sharp angles from the high-watt line of bulbs above the motel room double-sink and the yellowy light ...

I love how it says are you writing a novel. Singular. My life would be so much simpler if I went back to working on one novel, but I don't ...

Huh. So, this was very interesting. While I agree with the person above--a lack of action, perhaps; too much build up--you did do one thing right. You did show redemption. ...

Hello, all. I know I’ve done this before (and it wasn’t exactly a win, my fault mostly), but I’ve decided to try it again (because it was fun and prompts ...

So, in my latest novel "Mythos", my trying pair--Angela and Jae--do a lot of illegal things. It's a fact of life. In my latest chapter, they're going to pretend to ...

Wow. Very nice poem there. The first two stanzas had my breath bated and everything. Very--dark, I suppose. And I quite like dark. It made me think of some fantasy ...

Okay, so, Captain Nitpick here. I'm afraid I'm going to be a mite harsher than usual. Be aware I'm not the master of poetry, though. Um, yes. Anyway. The first ...

A/N: Since last chapter was so short, I've decided to provide you all with another chapter on the same day--because I'm awesome (lol, no). In other news, chapter six is ...