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Re: I need a potentially controversional Book/Quote
Some things I can imagine being censored: Ender's Game, The Chocolate War, Catcher in the Rye, Gone with the Wind, Child 44, anything based off of gangs/drug use/teens having physical ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Demons
I suggest 'generally' basing your creations on certain myths--but not following them to a t. That can get boring. I mean, it's cool when you have a certain creature in ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Characters Masquerading as Authority Figures
Thanks, Jagged! I may have to ask them some questions soon, then. ;)
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Ambulances and Police Procedure
I come up with the most random questions, I know. Today's? Anybody have any clues about what would happen if a trio of teenagers found a man in a pit ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Haze (Chapter Two)
A/N: Thanks to my lovely reviewers, this has been edited. Enjoy! /// CHAPTER TWO Origin THEN Jacksin hadn’t worried about much then. I mean, he worried about the normal stuff--a ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: a little dream in abstract
Very offbeat (as in off-kilter). I quite like it. It's very beautiful and it paints pictures in my mind, things I can almost touch but just barely. This was a ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Hallowed Grounds
Wow. So, a lot of emotion in one piece. Or, at least, I felt it. I could feel my heart speed up and feel the protag's indecision. I suppose that's ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Metastatic
So, this was good. The writing style was pretty interesting and unique, even if it felt odd to my brain--I sort of had to keep rereading certain sentences and such. ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Haze (Chapter One)
A/N: So, hi. After a few kind comments (on Sampson , Barbara , and, most recently, Life in Flame ) and one particular author here, I decided to bite the ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Pacing, and why it is important
So, this was very helpful! :D I've been having trouble with one novel of mine because it's only about 22,000 words but I can already see the end looming ahead ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: The Beach
Good story. There's plenty of emotion in this piece and, as the person above said, you can certainly feel the character, you feel like you get to know them in ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Life in Flame
A/N: So, this was sort of written for The Very, Very Dark Contest. Once you're through reading (if you read), maybe you won't be too surprised. In other news: This ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Barbara EDITED
A/N: So, around the time I wrote Sampson , I wrote this novella. It's a campy, sort of suspense/horror-ish (with crack?) piece that would have done good in the early ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Mythos (Chapter Eight)
A/N: So, finally, here is chapter eight! -tosses around confetti- Otherwise? Still out on a limb here but I hope you guys continue to like it. -smiles- Also? Chapter nine ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Characters Masquerading as Authority Figures
Funnily, I have already gotten around to that scene now (and I think the chapter it belongs to is posted!). And . . . I winged it. Otherwise, thanks for ...
Aug 2, 2011
