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Very nice job! Can't think of much else to say . . . the others pretty much covered it . . . but I had to comment. It is quite ...

I finished on November 25th. :D Of the two NaNos I've done, it's the largest and the quickest done. -is impressed with self- However, it is in no way finished. ...

Weirdly, my novel is going okay. Maybe because it's both depressing but doesn't take itself seriously (I read too much crack fanfiction in my formative years), so I have plenty ...

Name: Prostlon Age: Twenty-five Gender: Female Race: Human Rank: Resistance member (perhaps the leader's favorite sidekick?) Allegiance: Other (either self or gods) Appearance: (Description and pictur

First impression (based off first paragraph): Catches me pretty good. I like how it starts in media res. I get a feel for the character from how I see Lady ...

A/N: So, in English we were told to do a short story relating to a quest. So, I wrote this. It's way shorter than it appeared on paper, so I ...

No one? Meh.

Title: Haze Link(s): Chapter Five: Chapter Six: Genre: realistic horror, dark/urban fantasy. Brief overview: Haze is a complicated book; it goes from then, a time several months in the past, ...

Hm. It makes me think Stephen King automatically (which is weird--like someone would actually do a crossover between Carrie and Needful Things), yet, it could be interesting. My suggestions? Look ...

So, I quite like Game of Thrones (George R.R. Martin and Jane Espensen? Yes, please!) and Supernatural . I love me some fantasy and myth, yo. Also, Sherlock , Life ...

Nice job! While I don't exactly have much sympathy for the characters yet (but I'm probably some sort of emotionless weirdo, so don't mind me), I really want to read ...

Artemis "Artie" Faust I rolled my eyes when our self-made 'team captain' punched the butch guy's jaw, which merely surprised him. I could almost literally see loves patriarchy written on ...

A/N: So, hey again. -waves- I hope you all enjoy this chapter like the ones prior to it and perhaps grace me with reviews. Otherwise, I'm not sure if I ...

A/N: Hey guys! So, this is clearly chapter five of Haze . I just finished it today (I was writing it at the same time as chapter six, hence the ...

4/10. While it seems interesting, you start with a cliche and you use sour twice in the space of two sentences, which would work--if perhaps it was a longer paragraph. ...