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Re: The Compendium of Truth: Chapter 1
Interesting, this story obviously has potential. I am unsure if you got the saying from a song but as soon as I read it I thought of a country song ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1
This has to be my favorite piece I have found on this site so far. The detail is incredible, and since I am a huge fan of details since they ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: The Nightmare Begins
First off I must ask you about the way you began your story. Were you trying to go for parallelism or something like that? I would suggest rethinking the way ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: The Stingrays: The Guraz's Revenge (Prologue)
You are going to continue right? Sorry I must ask that since it seems as if this will make a good story. Admittedly I typically do not like Science Fiction, ...
Jul 6, 2013