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  • Archive Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)

    Name: Cancer Gender: Male Age: body, 43; bio-mechanical implants, 20 Appearance: Cancer’s human parts look ten years younger than he actually is. His bio-implants continue to support his body, slowi

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Archive Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)

    Okay, I have an idea but it relies on the character being non-human. You said in the brief/intro or whatever you wish to call it that that was fine, but ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Destruction

    Wow. That is how to write a poem. For something so short, that really packs a punch. I would be the first to point out that I know absolutely squit ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Mud

    Mud. Thick, freezing-cold mud that came up to the waist and made fighting near impossible. Mud was the first thing that came to mind when Syn though of this bloody ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Dark In A Man

    Yo. :D To begin, I thought this was a pretty good piece. It was a bit difficult to follow in places (namely, not starting a new paragraph for each new ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Prologue

    Hi, hope you're well etc, not that I care :D On with the review my friend! This is actually pretty good. I like the way you've thrown the reader straight ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The World Outside

    This is a good piece. The tension is definitely there, and you give a good twist with the zombie hoard swarming the children's park. Everything seemed to fit into place- ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Other Re: When the Lights go out

    Well, I feel rather feeble writing after the praise you just got, but really I would just like to say that this was an excellent piece. The opening sentences were ...

    Sep 8, 2011


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