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Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Name: Cancer Gender: Male Age: body, 43; bio-mechanical implants, 20 Appearance: Cancer’s human parts look ten years younger than he actually is. His bio-implants continue to support his body, slowi
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Okay, I have an idea but it relies on the character being non-human. You said in the brief/intro or whatever you wish to call it that that was fine, but ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Destruction
Wow. That is how to write a poem. For something so short, that really packs a punch. I would be the first to point out that I know absolutely squit ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Mud
Mud. Thick, freezing-cold mud that came up to the waist and made fighting near impossible. Mud was the first thing that came to mind when Syn though of this bloody ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: The Dark In A Man
Yo. :D To begin, I thought this was a pretty good piece. It was a bit difficult to follow in places (namely, not starting a new paragraph for each new ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
Hi, hope you're well etc, not that I care :D On with the review my friend! This is actually pretty good. I like the way you've thrown the reader straight ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: The World Outside
This is a good piece. The tension is definitely there, and you give a good twist with the zombie hoard swarming the children's park. Everything seemed to fit into place- ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: When the Lights go out
Well, I feel rather feeble writing after the praise you just got, but really I would just like to say that this was an excellent piece. The opening sentences were ...
Sep 8, 2011
