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Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Cancer Cancer ran as fast as he could into the pitch darkness of the service tunnel, hoping and praying to any god that would listen that Leah would be waiting ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent, This World | Chapter Two
Hello again. Good to see this story's going well. Your style works even better here than in chapter one. The way you blend reality and thought is, if nothing else, ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Taur Taur moved difficultly as he gathered up the fabric of his tent and forced it into a tight roll. He had not had time to properly splint his leg, ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent, This World Chapter One
Well where to start. What a piece! I can't believe no-one has reviewed it yet. I loved all the descriptions you've used at the beginning during Joy's nightmare. I had ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Cancer Cancer could feel them inside him. Nanobots. Tiny robots, tuned in to his biometrics, floating around until they were needed. And were they ever needed. The things moved through ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Taur Taur felt pain in the aftermath of the battle. Not just physical pain, but something etherial. Death did not weigh well on him. He took a moment to look ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Smiths (Closed)
Name: Vinn Kuur Gender: Male Race: Cathar (cath-are) Position on ship: Deputy/Pilot Age: 43 Appearance: cathar.jpg Vinn has golden fur with some slightly darker stripes. He often braids his long ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Cancer Cancer let the words escape his mouth before he realised what he was saying. "even if they didn't me" It was the story of his life. Or at least, ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Taur Taur strode forth, spinning his battleaxe in his hands. He felt the weapon's weight, remembering how it had felt to weild it in combat. One of the riders broke ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Cancer Cancer sat on an upturned barrel inside bunker 13. The bunker was supposed to be a safe haven, but it looked to be anything but. The room they were ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Taur Taur looked up from his work to see both Haven and Wyverus walking towards him from opposite sides of the camp. He wiped his knife off on his forearm ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Whoaa, that's a lot... And how you could have possibly chosen my name, I won't speculate. The story will be underway as soon as I can get it done, so ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Rae Adam
Hello... Can I just say thank you for entering this competition. We've been waiting a while for someone to do so! Anyway, your character. Particle is a good idea, and ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Corpse Pile
In answer to your question Pink, yes this is part of a larger story. I would like to put the next few chapters on to YWS, but I am just ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Corpse Pile
Aaron could hear it, clawing at the heavy metal door. Screeching. Gnawing. It was right outside, and it was baying for his blood. He cast around, looking for something to ...
Oct 5, 2011
