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Taur If any doubt remained in the back of Taur's mind, Jenko's words put stay to it. He was a fine leader, but lacked the wisdom and experience of age. ...

This is chapter 2 of the story. Chapter 1 has already been uploaded as a short story called Corpse Pile. It is in My portfolio. Please, please, please, read it, ...

Slaughterhouse. Aaron had discovered the slaughterhouse while searching for food. It was dark, damp, dilapidated. The reek of rotten carcasses hung thick in the air. The freezers had held little ...

Well it looks like some people are harder to please than I am, as i really enjoed your work. I haven't read the other work that you've posted, but this ...

Okay, that was different. But in a good way. If I'm honest, I thought twice about reading this. 21st century Mozart? I thought. What a load of rubbish. Truthfully, I'm ...

Wow, can't believe I'm the first to review this. I guess it's the title scaring people off because they expect the whole piece to be in German. Personally I found ...

Taur Jenko made as if to enter the tavern, but Taur put a restraining hand on his shoulder. "In situations such as this, size will matter," he said, before entering ...

Um, well this will probably prove pointless as the above review has most likely covered everything I had intended to say, but oh well. I have to agree with MSDavies ...

Ah. Midgit. Didn't know you'd written this... I feel soft for saying it after twit there ripped you to pieces, but this was pretty good. My only question is, what ...

I have to say, regardless of whether this is technically a story or not, I liked this just as it was. It's the descriptions. As soon as I read the ...

Whoa, need to get it together after that one. To be honest, this piece is demented. And that's what I love about it! It has no form, no real rules, ...

567ajt makes a good case, but I completely disagree. I think the narration absolutely makes this story. It's like reading someone's thought processes as they try to form a story. ...

Well, where to start. Your style of writing continues to astound me. It's more like being inside Jo's head than a spectator, which really gets you into the story. I ...

Cancer It was Zephyr's voice which roused Cancer from the dark void of unconciousness. With effort, he opened his eyes. At first he thought he hadn't, so dark was the ...

Taur "Would you teach me to weild a sword? I fear for the safety of the others when the beast roams free." Taur had mused upon Haven's words for the ...